Blood and Magnolias
have been hounding me to get the story made into a movie. After seeing
people crying over the ending and having them angry with me because they
got caught reading the story at work, or were late to work because they
stayed up too late trying to read just one more chapter, I put the idea
Before I haphazardly went in
search of someone to convert the book into a movie, I decided I might take a ‘whack’ at it myself. I did write one script based on a book
that isn’t yet published back in I can’t remember when (yes, I am working
on it), so I had a general idea of the structure. However, I wanted to
understand what makes a good script and the development process.
So, I started looking into
screenwriting classes. Some instructors told me flat out not to waste my
time or theirs (are you really a teacher?). “It isn’t possible. The
quantum leap from writing novels to scripts cannot be achieved?” Heard
this in one form or another, repeatedly. “It is a whole other way of
writing. You have to think differently.” With a novel, you have about 400
pages to fill with description, dialogue, feelings, and emotions. With a
script, you have between 90 and 130 pages, but 100-120 is more the current
bent, and the dialogue must do triple duty in conveying not only the words
but the feeling and emotion as well. And, if that wasn’t enough of a
challenge, you have an average of about three lines to set the scene.
Well, those who know me understand
that telling me something is impossible or that I can’t do it is just a
big fat dare!
I identified what looked like a
good online screenwriting class and asked the question, again. "Is it true
if you write novels you can't write scripts?" I got an answer I could live
with. "You can do anything..." if you are willing to put in the work. It
won't be easy, and you might not succeed. Failure is just another word for
learning so what the heck, I took the leap.
Eight months later, I am here to
tell you it IS possible. At the beginning of the class, I
was ‘lost in space’ with terminology and tech and trying to figure out
where to go with my ideas. I started with one of my novels, thinking to
convert it to script. “Write a logline for your story,” they said as if
that was a simple thing. OMG! Take an entire story and break it down into
one sentence. Really?
My first logline truly sucked! It
was way too long, filled with descriptive words, and missed the mark in
a big way. The instructor even said, “You write novels don’t you?” Drat!
I’ve been discovered before I even have a chance to play. Not feeling so
confident now, but plugging along. “At least do the exercises and
assignments, maybe something will click,” I said to myself over and over
and over. Coffee, eyestrain, fits of flinging papers in the trash, all
signs for others to stay the heck out of the room.
This went on for the first three
months, and I will admit that I was beginning to fall on the side of the
naysayers. Then epiphany! Start with something completely new, so I’m not
dragging baggage on my uphill climb. Sigh, ah, that feels better. But now
I’m starting over, and I’m three months in, egad.
My muse felt my distress and
quickly stepped in planting an idea. What if a man broke into a woman’s
house and instead of being the victim, she kills him with a baseball bat?
Where did that violent idea come from? Yes, I own a bat, but I’d have to
be in real danger to hit someone with it. As it turns out my character,
Adita Albany, is in real danger. The intruder is a hitman, the third in a
string of them that she has summarily dispatched. Ooh, I like where this
is going. Adita is ex-FBI, well-trained, successful, but she’s been
ousted. Why? Think about that for a minute. Ooo, she married the son of a
criminal kingpin in order to save 30 women from a human trafficking ring.
The story evolved quickly, and I
had the first draft in a week. Really? How the heck did I do that? I’m not
sure. Maybe it was the Tennessee mountain air coupled with my close
encounter with a bear. Can you combine relaxation and adrenaline and come
up with a thriller worthy of an actress with guts and presence? Apparently
Is my script perfect? What in this
world is perfect? Do I think any screenplay has ever been perfect right
out of the box? Are you kidding me? Is it good? Hell, yes! I still look at
it and ask myself, “Who is in here with me? Did I write that?” But, then,
I do that with every story I write. I still cry at the ending of
Magnolias, and I know the words by heart.
Below is my current logline and
short summary (still evolving) for my screenplay REDEMPTION. I have two
more scripts in the works with a completion deadline of January 1. And,
no, I am not giving up writing novels. As a matter of fact, there are two
approaching final edit phase, one more for the Colony Series,
Fallow, and a standalone called
Harvest of the Innocents.
Oh, and did I tell you that
REDEMPTION is entered into five scriptwriting competitions. Go big or go
My well of creation went dry for a
while, long story. But, apparently, it has been refilled. I’m overflowing.
If you are a fan and you know anyone in the film biz, nudge them in my
direction. I’ll make sure you get a free ticket. There is a link below to
a PDF of this information. Feel free to print and circulate.
discredited ex-agent must expose her horrifying connection to a presidential
candidate before his hitmen silence her.
“I’d like to report a
break in…Yes, he’s still here, but he’s not going anywhere. No rush.”
Adita Albany is no damsel in distress.
Despite her takedown of a human
trafficking enterprise specializing in babies for adoption and the
personal sacrifice it exacted, Adita is ousted from the Bureau and put
on the watch list. After all, she did marry the son of a criminal
Credit for the
successful operation that freed over thirty women and crippled a gun
and drug running syndicate is hijacked by Senator Westgate now poised
to capture the oval office.
holds secrets that could fast track him to Federal prison. Adita must die.
afraid of a powerful Senator with a hit squad behind him? Not Adita!
Adita is more resourceful and less vulnerable than Westgate thinks.
She is highly trained, and she’s dealt with self-serving bastards
When Adita kills the
third in a string of hitmen with a baseball bat, no remorse, and
barely a blink, Detective Aberdeen wants cooperation and gets none. He
and Adita have history, unpleasant history. He’s an old enemy who
wants to be an alley, or does he? Adita has learned the hard way more
than once that trust is dangerous and she holds her secrets close.
Secrets the FBI and Homeland want to expose, and Senator Westgate
wants to bury—permanently.
Gathering a few questionable allies, Adita outlives the hitmen and
lands a bombshell of evidence on Senator Westgate, exposing him as a
criminal. His ‘kingdom’ is razed. Adita collects a hard-won victory
and the respect she has always deserved.
mess with a bitch who has an MP9 and PTSD.